Saturday, December 8, 2007

ohh. come back to me. please. just stay.
even if it's for a moment longer.
stay in my hazy vision.
i want to be able to feel again.
i want to feel the warmth of your love.
i want to feel your joy.
i want you to stay long enough
so that i can be strong.
please.
take notice.
take my pitiful offerings,
i found them on my way here.
it's not much. but these day's i've got nothing.
make sense out of this mess before you.
redemption never felt so far away.
so, i beg you.
find potential
there must be some part of me left
that still glows...
but stay.
stay in thes candel light.
as it flickers, disfiguring your image.
stay, a moment longer.

3 comments:

Tessa said...

i dont' understand, although i'm not sure that you wanted anyone to understand what this poem meant. i may have an idea...but all in all its so good that it leaves me in the mystery of it all. if i was in one of those things i would be saying "i want more, i want more" because really, i want to know what happens, what its about...its amazing.

Anonymous said...

i was meant to be about God.
about him making something of my pityful life.

Tessa said...

rae...i reread this with open ears...a open heart. and even though i'm hurting now i realize what you meant. you have amazing potencial and God had a space in a job in a place somewhere opened up for you. He's going ot get you there but its going ot take his time, his place, and he's not going to do it until your ready and he's ready....i love you rae...you bring joy to my life...i know your not ok now, but i'll be praying for you. I'm here anytime you need me.